Rough Cut Feed Back

Group 54 said- "The first shots were wicked. Liked the lighting, nice monochromatic vibe. Robots get boring, need a singer or something too? Camera work and tonality deteriorates. Green screen looks tacky. Village wasnt best setting. Would be better in a more urban area.

Group 49 said- "Started off well. Shot following robot too long. Green / white screen worked, blakc and white bit good. Shaking/ sped up/ jerkiness was good but used too much. Robot home made suits were good."

Group 50 said- "Good dancers. Nice effects, speeding up and words could cut to drums etc in the longer shots."

Group 52 said- "Like low angle shots of robot playing instruments. Good editing on first shots. like black and white. Shakiness makes eyes go funny.Good costumes. Not the best background for drum shot. Like the robot numbers in corner of screen. Locations bit random sometimes."

Potty-meister N said- "i like the robot P.O.V green shots with writing. Some bits go on too long. eg, walking down the street. Finish the dancing green screen shots. Put in a background. Tighten up weaker parts such as robot coming out of house, bit slow."